From 7a98a216dec70340a3627dd38f6862d1a4cfca82 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Loui Chang Date: Sun, 25 Jan 2009 20:37:25 -0500 Subject: Fix typos, formatting, and vague language where possible. Signed-off-by: Loui Chang [Fixed menu.lst: LiveCD -> Live CD -aaron] Signed-off-by: Aaron Griffin --- configs/default/menu.lst | 2 +- configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst | 4 ++-- configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt | 18 +++++++++--------- configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg | 2 +- configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg | 4 ++-- configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt | 2 +- configs/install-iso/instructions | 16 +++++++++------- configs/xfce4/Makefile | 2 +- configs/xfce4/overlay/boot/grub/menu.lst | 2 +- 9 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) (limited to 'configs') diff --git a/configs/default/menu.lst b/configs/default/menu.lst index cf9823f..0852720 100644 --- a/configs/default/menu.lst +++ b/configs/default/menu.lst @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ default 0 color light-blue/blue black/light-grey splashimage=/boot/splash.xpm.gz -title Boot ArchLinux LiveCD +title Boot Arch Linux Live CD kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75% initrd /boot/archiso.img diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst index 067985d..b4ddc4c 100644 --- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst +++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/grub/menu.lst @@ -3,11 +3,11 @@ default 0 color light-blue/blue black/light-grey splashimage=/boot/splash.xpm.gz -title Boot ArchLinux LiveCD +title Boot Arch Linux Live CD kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75% initrd /boot/archiso_pata.img -title Boot ArchLinux LiveCD [Legacy IDE, no SATA] +title Boot Arch Linux Live CD [Legacy IDE, no SATA] kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75% initrd /boot/archiso_ide.img diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt index b25f56f..7720865 100644 --- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt +++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/help/contrib.txt @@ -2,15 +2,15 @@ HOW-TO: Contribute to this help ------------------------------- This help is rather simplistic. -In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a text -file. Formatting is important (due to grub limitations). The files MUST be 80 -characters wide, and 23 lines long. Any more, and your formatting will be -corrupted when viewing the help. Please note that if your help is short, it is -worthwhile to pad with empty lines, up to 23 lines. - -Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the ArchLinux bug -tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org - +In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a +text file. Formatting is important (due to grub limitations). The +files MUST be less than 80 characters wide, and 23 lines long. +Any more, and your formatting will be corrupted when viewing the help. +Please note that if your help is short, it is worthwhile to pad with +empty lines, up to 23 lines. + +Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the +Arch Linux bug tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg index 551956a..5405c49 100644 --- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg +++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/boot.msg @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ splash.rle -ArchLinux Install and LiveCD (0e2009.0107) +Arch Linux Install and Live CD (0e2009.0107) 0eF207 -> more boot options 0eF307 -> Troubleshooting, Help diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg index 86a6af4..8e38bbe 100644 --- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg +++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/isolinux/options.msg @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ Boot flavors on this ISO: ---------------------------------- -0earch07 : ArchLinux LiveCD [pata] (the Default) -0earchide07 : ArchLinux LiveCD [legacy IDE mode] +0earch07 : Arch Linux Live CD [pata] (the Default) +0earchide07 : Arch Linux Live CD [legacy IDE mode] 0ememtest07 : Run memtest (Memory Testing) diff --git a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt index 77417f3..213b3ae 100644 --- a/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt +++ b/configs/install-iso/boot-files/releasenotes.txt @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -ArchLinux LiveCD - 2009.01 +Arch Linux Live CD - 2009.01 Release Notes -------------------------- diff --git a/configs/install-iso/instructions b/configs/install-iso/instructions index b14b456..cdf77ff 100644 --- a/configs/install-iso/instructions +++ b/configs/install-iso/instructions @@ -1,14 +1,14 @@ - ArchLinux + Arch Linux Installation and Live-CDs ---------------------------- -All CDs and USB-Images are installation mediums and Live-CDs, +All CDs and USB images are installation mediums and Live CDs which can be used as maintenance and rescue systems. FTP-ISOs/Images: ---------------- -These are the preferred install mediums for ArchLinux. You get always -the actual package versions using these mediums. +These are the preferred install mediums for Arch Linux. +You can always get up to date packages using these mediums. archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.img i686/32bit USB-Image @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ ISOs with the isolinux bootloader: Core-ISOs/Images: ----------------- -These are for offline installations when no Internet access available +These are for offline installations when no Internet access is available to install the base system. archlinux-200X.yy-core-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO @@ -33,7 +33,8 @@ to install the base system. How to use these installation images: ------------------------------------- -Please ensure the sha1sum matches that in the SHA1SUMS file in this directory +Please ensure the sha1sum for your downloaded file matches the checksum +in the the SHA1SUMS file in this directory. See section in the "Arch Linux Install Guide": http://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Official_Arch_Linux_Install_Guide#Pre-Installation @@ -42,4 +43,5 @@ For the USB-Images see: Happy installing! Happy ARCHing! -- ArchLinux Release Engineering team +- Arch Linux Release Engineering team + diff --git a/configs/xfce4/Makefile b/configs/xfce4/Makefile index 6a609fb..f4d3009 100644 --- a/configs/xfce4/Makefile +++ b/configs/xfce4/Makefile @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ # I'm a make retard, there are probably prettier ways of doing this... WORKING_DIR=$(PWD)/.work -ISO_NAME=$(PWD)/Archlinux-XFCE4-Live.iso +ISO_NAME=$(PWD)/archlinux-xfce4-live.iso all: iso diff --git a/configs/xfce4/overlay/boot/grub/menu.lst b/configs/xfce4/overlay/boot/grub/menu.lst index 6755d09..4cd24a3 100644 --- a/configs/xfce4/overlay/boot/grub/menu.lst +++ b/configs/xfce4/overlay/boot/grub/menu.lst @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ default 0 color light-blue/blue black/light-grey splashimage=/boot/splash.xpm.gz -title Boot ArchLinux LiveCD +title Boot Arch Linux Live CD kernel /boot/vmlinuz26 lang=en locale=en_US.UTF-8 ramdisk_size=75% initrd /boot/archiso.img -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2